StephanM (12-23-2018)
A few things I would recommend changing for your future guides visual wise;
- Remove the V with the square and purple circle at the start (after the epic shen logo goes away), the transition is weird and the cube feels out of place
- For the background at the start I would only use the splash of the champion the guide is about (though colourwise it is nice to have cold vs warm, but Hecarim feels out of place)
- Use a higher quality pointer/finger image, this one just hurt my feels XD
- Hide your chat when showing full replays
- Pretty sure you can hide the recording UI as well (the timeline, the box for fog and such)
- Personally I cringe about the 'like, subscribe and comment' in your video (goes for any Youtuber), but that is my personal take xoxo
What I like about the guide;
- Love most of the intro
- The shen logo <3
- Good mic sound
- Good speech
- Chill music in the background that is pretty balanced volume wise with your voice
- Visual info text/charts/images
- Everything else is also fine such as your 'brand' logo, the socialmedia in the top left are fine to have in your video
- Easy to follow guide for low scrubs like us
- That first gank huehue
Taint (12-23-2018)
The V logo is my brand and its part of the intro so I don't think I'm gonna change anything about it
The backgrounds you see are two of my mains meaning the intro isn't about the champion the guide is about, its simply there to show people I play those 2 champions
The finger image is from Final Fantasy if you've heard of it and I think the quality was fine but if you say it's bad I'll look for another one, its an old game so its supposed to look like that in the first place
I'll hide my chat next time you're right about that one, forgot to do that
I'll hide the UI too, that's in the way of the video, you're right again
The like and subscribe is to get my channel going, and the comment thing is to get the viewers to engage with the video, the more they engage the more my video gets up there in the recommended section
Thanks for the feedback, I'll be working on it c:
Well the thing with the finger is that it is so stretched that it kills the quality.
ill use a different thumbnail for the video but this is it for now, new video on how to one shot with rengar
i meant the rune used in the video mostly, maybe you should consider making a part for that specific rune or other runes that could be better against different matchups (maybe you did but i only watched till 3 min cause im not interested in jungle and didnt see referring to runes anywhere till that point)
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