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    I Have made the following poems from my heart..... plz don't criticize me about me and my love...... it will ripe me up inside... the only reson i am releasing this to freestylers world is because i know u will support me and my girl said i would do it if i really love her ...... she wanted me to show of some of my poetry.... Ty ..... plz coment on what u think ty....


    A gentle word like a spark of light,
    Illuminates my soul
    And as each sound goes deeper,
    It's YOU that makes me whole

    There is no corner, no **** place,
    YOUR LOVE cannot fill
    And if the world starts causing waves,
    It's your devotion that makes them still

    And yes you always speak to me,
    In sweet honesty and truth
    Your caring heart keeps out the rain,
    YOUR LOVE, the ultimate roof

    So thank you my Love for being there,
    For supporting me, my life
    I'll do the same for you, you know,
    My Beautiful, girlfriend . -For Chelsea


    A path winding across the horizon
    over mountains, across seas
    through blue skies and gray
    never ceasing, continuous.
    My love for you -Chelsea



    My heart and soul is in the next one so read it with care.....


    When I First Looked Into Your Eyes

    When first I looked into your eyes
    each breath became a thousand sighs.
    My heart drummed out a thunder beat
    I glowed with joy from head to feet.
    The hand of love had touched my soul,
    as the bell of destiny began to toll.
    The tide of love began to rise,
    the world was filled with summer skies.
    My sodden clouds of cold and grey
    glowed with gold, then wisped away.
    A brilliant rainbow arched across,
    as waves of love began to toss.
    The air was filled with lovebird cries,
    when I first looked into your eyes.

    When I first looked into your eyes,
    all time and space were paralyzed
    And in that instant, I was shown
    a universe I had never known.
    I dwell there still, in Paradise,
    when I look into your eyes.

    To my beloved -Chelsea Bridge
    ty every one plz comment on my poetry and plz go ez i have sensitive feelings

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    Its so weird cause my ingame name starts as Chelsea :S

    But pretty good, i have some love poems of mine to my ex laying around to ^_^

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    here is one i wrote a cuple days ago for our 10months

    Never once before
    has a man adored
    a beautiful lady
    such as your self
    like i

    10 months flew by with quick haste
    Not one minute of waste
    With each kiss my love grows even taller than i

    With each glimpse of beauty
    i quiver with weakness
    but with that kiss apon my lips
    i fell as if i can sink 1,000 battle ships

    Forever and Always-
    Yours Truly:
    **** -NO need for you guys to know my name-
    Her eyes,
    They burned like wild fire,
    She had came.
    Came to take her desires,
    By force,
    Or...,
    At least she's a damn good liar.
    Check out my poetry here!
    http://poetryofmaxim.wordpress.com/

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    Your love really inspired me to create a poem as well, please critique if you feel necessary.



    When I read this poem I cry,
    Because I know at the end of each verse, a little inside I die.
    For me to keep on forcing myself to read this rubbish,
    I want to drown myself in the tub, Bish.
    But before I go commit suicide,
    After reading two lines of this I know at least I tried.

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    Well since we're all sharing o.O

    im walking on this lonely road
    help me from walking it alone
    and i am tasting the flavour of missing you
    when your gone..

    my path is empty without
    and my eyes are filled with tears
    when your gone..

    this type of story tells
    i disaprove directions
    and how you bring me to an end

    but honestly dear forever and always
    it will kill me to leave your side
    and break me when our hands should stray
    if it all came crashing down
    forever and always ill remember you


    i dont want this moment to ever end
    cause without you im empty
    times like these will change
    and it is in range

    woo i wanted you to see that you are
    everything.. everything to me
    cause baby theres enough light in your
    eyes to light up our little world

    your lifes the air that i breath
    i wanna be the last frame in your eyes
    the first thought on your mind
    you broke the link that held me tied

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    NitroAbob's Avatar The Wolf Man

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    just so you all know poems don't have to rhyme
    Her eyes,
    They burned like wild fire,
    She had came.
    Came to take her desires,
    By force,
    Or...,
    At least she's a damn good liar.
    Check out my poetry here!
    http://poetryofmaxim.wordpress.com/

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    Originally Posted by NitroAnon View Post
    just so you all know poems don't have to rhyme
    Mine didnt

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    NitroAbob's Avatar The Wolf Man

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    i know im just saying though
    Her eyes,
    They burned like wild fire,
    She had came.
    Came to take her desires,
    By force,
    Or...,
    At least she's a damn good liar.
    Check out my poetry here!
    http://poetryofmaxim.wordpress.com/

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    lol'd at all of you.

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    Originally Posted by CsSniper aka Skilz View Post
    lol'd at all of you.

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    woot skilz is back o.o

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