New Signature. Second try ..

[Paradise Heaven]

Rate Please!

[Nickachu]

The smudging... go check at some other signatures as a reference and then look up some tutorials on how to smudge properly.
that's the main part I noticed, the smudging is truly horrible,
but as a second try this is really good actually.

one more thing, use colors that match eachother, your text is white/brown whilst the tag is green/red.
it's distracting.

but once again, look up some tutorials and alot of references you're definitely going in the right direction.

[Leopard]

i disagree with nick.
i think the smudging fits the signature and it makes our eye focus on him.
but I agree on the text part, that has to change.
very nice signature, and happy holidays ^^.

[joker008]

Nice Signature bro !! 2nd try and it was great

[Juriën]

mehh, I don't have a good feeling about it, just can't find what

[Paradise Heaven]

The smudging... go check at some other signatures as a reference and then look up some tutorials on how to smudge properly.
that's the main part I noticed, the smudging is truly horrible,
but as a second try this is really good actually.

one more thing, use colors that match eachother, your text is white/brown whilst the tag is green/red.
it's distracting.

but once again, look up some tutorials and alot of references you're definitely going in the right direction.

Thanks for tips Nick !

I'll work on the smudge and the text

[Yuzan]

I actually like it more due to the smudging, it makes it seem like he is in a zone that was hit with chemicals and it is so deadly that his own armor is starting to rot to the point it turns into dust in the air, along with the environment around him.


8/10
-1 for font
-1 for text positioning