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    Paradise Heaven's Avatar Retired

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    CnC/Rate.

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    Resort's Avatar Aloha

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    oo nice 8/10

    the main text font is nice but i dont personally like the sub text font, if i was you id change it to something else i just dont think the current one fits
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    Last edited by Resort; 01-17-2013 at 06:48 PM.

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    Dust's Avatar vroedoe

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    more blending, it looks very boring and simple atm

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    The background is to dark in my eyes

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    Megpoid's Avatar Meh..

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    Render is to dark , u need to make it a bit brighter to have ppl focus on it.
    Font and just white doesnt rly fits the background

    6/10

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    Nice

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    Hmm it's a good concept. But you need to work one some things

    starting with the basics, follow these tips;

    1. The background is way to blurry. It looks like you put some kind of pen stroke over it. If you look at a picture, you'll never see this. So, make sure whenever you're trying to add some depth, just try to blur it a bit, with: filter -> Blur/blur more.

    2. The c4d you used, is directly behind the render, but it has the same depth as the background.. which makes it, in peoples eyes, think it's part of the background. And if you imagine the background without a render and see a wild c4d in there you'll be like; what is that?

    3. Work on some render effects! ;D You only added some filters and some gradient maps. Try to play with smudging abit. NOT too much, just a bit.

    4. You could try and add some lightning source, this will give it a far more realistic effect, even though it's fantasy.

    4/10, because I think it's rather simple. But you did improve though. Keep on trying, that will help you the most.


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    Resort's Avatar Aloha

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    anyone know where he got the render? im not looking for that render but the site for more renders

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    ZoneStyle's Avatar Think less, live more

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    8/10.
    change the font location.
    don't put the font location into the render that suck
    then i will give you 10/10.

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    Originally Posted by Resort View Post
    anyone know where he got the render? im not looking for that render but the site for more renders
    Http://www.bakarenders.com Try that one


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