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    Pulse's Avatar I AM THE ORIGINAL

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    Do you want harsh CnC or no?

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    KoreanAim's Avatar Mada mada dane

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    im astonished, you got a really nice work here, i can see all the effort, keep it up!
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    Originally Posted by Pulse View Post
    Do you want harsh CnC or no?
    ofcourse I do, even thought I really know it sucks atm. but bring me it!

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    You will ever fix it or ... ney?

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    Originally Posted by HellSniper View Post
    You will ever fix it or ... ney?
    Yeah I'm going to completely re-make this later today

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    Curves of the body are too sharp - Hips, shoulders, chin, etc. all need smoothing.
    The plushy beak seems too "realistic" for the plushy itself if you understand what I'm saying
    The sparkles in the air are not too bright, but if you're trying to add that effect, I would add more, subtler dots.
    Shadows between legs that distinguish them from each other need to go further up her thighs and need to be a little thinner
    Eye lashes are too "brushed" - They look like you used a caligraphy brush once for each one. It's not realistic enough for the closed eyes. I would thin them out.

    Done editing. If you have anything to say, don't hesitate.
    Last edited by Pulse; 02-24-2013 at 08:25 PM.

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    its Nice

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    Originally Posted by Pulse View Post
    Curves of the body are too sharp - Hips, shoulders, chin, etc. all need smoothing.
    The plushy beak seems too "realistic" for the plushy itself if you understand what I'm saying
    The sparkles in the air are not too bright, but if you're trying to add that effect, I would add more, subtler dots.
    Shadows between legs that distinguish them from each other need to go further up her thighs and need to be a little thinner
    Eye lashes are too "brushed" - They look like you used a caligraphy brush once for each one. It's not realistic enough for the closed eyes. I would thin them out.

    Done editing. If you have anything to say, don't hesitate.
    Nothing to say, except that it's true.
    thanks ;3

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