5/10.
Just seem generic to me, but I'm a hard ass for originality and innovation too so don't take my comment to heart.
5/10.
Just seem generic to me, but I'm a hard ass for originality and innovation too so don't take my comment to heart.
Her eyes,
They burned like wild fire,
She had came.
Came to take her desires,
By force,
Or...,
At least she's a damn good liar.Check out my poetry here!
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