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    Ommadawn's Avatar Bird + Trash = ?

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    good frags, and epic start LMAO

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    Thanks everyone

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    Divine's Avatar Ex Head Game Moderator

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    Sexiest trailer I've seen.

    "What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us."



    "The brave may not live forever, but the cautious do not live at all."

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    Originally Posted by Divine View Post
    Sexiest trailer I've seen.
    You da sxc wan pls

    Also people I'd appreciate it if you guys would subscribe to my channel and like the video, thanks in advance!

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    Google's Avatar 눈 ͜ಎ눈

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    Amg pls fix the end :C


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    Originally Posted by DesiBoii View Post
    Wow nice, i liked the idea where you decided to rewind it to end the video. Good job
    Originally Posted by Google View Post
    Amg pls fix the end :C
    Wot you mean fix ending???????

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    RandomHero's Avatar The Newgen Developer

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    Nice work man !

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    When you're editing videos you should apply some rules.



    As you can see it says Title/action safe, make sure your titles (text) don't get passed the borders, in the first few seconds your text does, its a lot better not doing that.

    Try to apply an equal style, you use various fonts and text. Try to smooth it out by having it all the same font, color etc. etc.

    I think you did a good job overall, but the story thing is too long imo.

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    What you could change/fix about the video:
    • First clip isn't widescreen ratio (black side bars)
    • Try some more movie like fonts (just loads of trailers)
    • Perhaps use a male character instead of a female character since the voice is a male voice

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    Nice dude, liked watching this.
    Total amount donate: 400-450?
    ~Pirate^9


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