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    Originally Posted by KingSpell View Post
    pro, i don't take ss when i win at cws, but you do because you suck

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    I got some suggestions/change/things to remove to make your fragment look better in general:
    • Remove the intro text (or change how you wrote it + a different font, something cleaner with more style).
    • Center the phrase "In association with" (I am sure it is not centered).
    • Change the font of the phrase "Freestyle Gunz community frag" and change the phrase to "Freestyle GunZ Community Frag" (since GunZ is with a capital Z > see their logo).
    • Change the font of the names of the players when you announced them all together (the clip was of a dungeon map, with 6 names on it).
    • You might want to remove the words 3 shot and 4 shot since that did not make that much sense cause some clips in between them had more then 3 or 4 shots, and it would look better just without the words.
    • And.. you might want to reduce the brightness of your frag with at least 10%, since it is pretty bright to me.


    What I do like about your frag is:
    • The music you chose
    • Most transitions that you used (from slow to normal/fast)
    • The way you recorded the maps (different then most video's)
    • The "Tain presents" animation
    • The clips you choice for this so far
    • The whole idea of actually releasing a community frag (people tried it before but never acutally did it)

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    nice frag done. but if its gona be orient picture vid.. might wana add some else to it thast associated

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    Originally Posted by Opeth View Post
    pro, i don't take ss when i win at cws, but you do because you suck
    No I SS'ed because you ego'd me since the first day I joined this server, and at any time I've proven to be better, so please stop talking.

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    gg brah ! (fapp here)
    FOR THE HATERS :




    Spoiler!

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    Originally Posted by StephanM View Post
    I got some suggestions/change/things to remove to make your fragment look better in general:
    • Remove the intro text (or change how you wrote it + a different font, something cleaner with more style).
    • Center the phrase "In association with" (I am sure it is not centered).
    • Change the font of the phrase "Freestyle Gunz community frag" and change the phrase to "Freestyle GunZ Community Frag" (since GunZ is with a capital Z > see their logo).
    • Change the font of the names of the players when you announced them all together (the clip was of a dungeon map, with 6 names on it).
    • You might want to remove the words 3 shot and 4 shot since that did not make that much sense cause some clips in between them had more then 3 or 4 shots, and it would look better just without the words.
    • And.. you might want to reduce the brightness of your frag with at least 10%, since it is pretty bright to me.


    What I do like about your frag is:
    • The music you chose
    • Most transitions that you used (from slow to normal/fast)
    • The way you recorded the maps (different then most video's)
    • The "Tain presents" animation
    • The clips you choice for this so far
    • The whole idea of actually releasing a community frag (people tried it before but never acutally did it)
    will work on those, thanks


    also this is like 3rd time uploaded idec anymore, it gets dislike botted everytime
    just like the video please

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    Originally Posted by Vizion View Post
    will work on those, thanks


    also this is like 3rd time uploaded idec anymore, it gets dislike botted everytime
    just like the video please

    Definitely worth the like!

    In the end, playing legit pays off.
    Originally Posted by DesiBoii View Post
    me and saiyan bffs

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    Originally Posted by Saiyan View Post
    Definitely worth the like!
    When i press the like button for this video it says: "The players are unskilled and the editor is bad so the video cant be liked" then my browser crash.

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    Originally Posted by Opeth View Post
    When i press the like button for this video it says: "The players are unskilled and the editor is bad so the video cant be liked" then my browser crash.
    You're definitely got a known virus.. OpethSucksTooHardForAFrag.exe ... please scan your computer and buy a likebot.

    In the end, playing legit pays off.
    Originally Posted by DesiBoii View Post
    me and saiyan bffs

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    Only thing I like is intro song.
    Other sht is gay as fck.

    y u gay man

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