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    Azula's Avatar Tauntshot Master

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    Originally Posted by Rhysin View Post
    That's more of a poem. You gotta flow with me on skype tho. Aint nobody freestyles in this bitch but me
    It's nothing like a poem if u hear me rappin it
    14-14-08
    But first, LET ME TAKE A SELFIE!

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    the br tomer was right,
    Dubstep.

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    EpicKLF's Avatar Why am i purple?...

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    Lighting effects are a bit too much on the side of the render. Also you should learn to smudge better overall 6/10. '-'

    OT: doesn't really have a Rap vibe to me, it does feel more like a poem and not very good one at that. Little improvements to certain words, will make the rhymes and flows a bit better.


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    Brutus's Avatar ^GHumble^E

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    Originally Posted by Yuzan View Post
    Whoa whoa whoa, Azula hold on.

    Next to a sheep that shit is weak.
    Never bought a prostitute on the fly?
    Hold up don't speak.
    You ain't sly, don't cry.
    Wipe yo nuts with something not so meek.
    Two-ply, that's what you need to try.

    I know something that'll float yo boat,
    Cause I'm sure you already done it so don't gloat.
    I bet for sure you ****ed a goat.

    With love,

    -Yuzan
    Whoa whoa whoa, Yuzan hold on. A gruff is a type goat mang.

    Are you dat Indian niga from the 40-year old vi-rgin?
    Whoa, Whoa, Step back, let the old-gen step in
    3 huffs n' puffs n' i'll blow your house in
    outta 3 billy goat gruffs, which one you fu-ckin'?

    ya came on their hill n' stole all the grass
    now you broke again bich, gotta pay wit dat ass
    difference is i got style, you got class
    so ride the gruff's horn, yeah he pumps fast

    Never bought a prostitute on the fly?
    only way you'd get one is if she got high
    n den' u gotta get gruff off cuz yo ass kinda dry
    n when gruff was done he said, here bich, got two-ply

    n you cleaned yourself shamefully
    felt kinda gross, cum drippin out degratingly
    fosho he floated your boat, just with a little pee
    now you read this back, n ur brain be like dee dee dee~!


    Sincerely, The Champ

    P.S. one love. never ment to make your momma cry....... i am forrea! why can't we be friends?

    Know your limits. If you wish to speak above others and to be held in high regard forever among legends, you must pause the game and have an infinite power source. You are only as grand as the memory you leave them with. Practice does not make perfect. Practicing perfection does. Once the mountain has been climbed, there are few steps towards the cliff. Remember to enjoy the view because once you've reached the top, there's nowhere to go but down.

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    Notorious's Avatar Khangus Khan

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    Abit off topic but anyone here ever remember the rap battles that used to be held on ventrilo?

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    Rhysin's Avatar Freestyler

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    Originally Posted by Brutus View Post
    Whoa whoa whoa, Yuzan hold on. A gruff is a type goat mang.

    Are you dat Indian niga from the 40-year old vi-rgin?
    Whoa, Whoa, Step back, let the old-gen step in
    3 huffs n' puffs n' i'll blow your house in
    outta 3 billy goat gruffs, which one you fu-ckin'?

    ya came on their hill n' stole all the grass
    now you broke again bich, gotta pay wit dat ass
    difference is i got style, you got class
    so ride the gruff's horn, yeah he pumps fast

    Never bought a prostitute on the fly?
    only way you'd get one is if she got high
    n den' u gotta get gruff off cuz yo ass kinda dry
    n when gruff was done he said, here bich, got two-ply

    n you cleaned yourself shamefully
    felt kinda gross, cum drippin out degratingly
    fosho he floated your boat, just with a little pee
    now you read this back, n ur brain be like dee dee dee~!


    Sincerely, The Champ

    P.S. one love. never ment to make your momma cry....... i am forrea! why can't we be friends?
    That's solid. This dude can flow.


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    Al-Malik // The King

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    Good shit. Make a rap thread.

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    Rhysin's Avatar Freestyler

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    Originally Posted by Adam View Post
    Good shit. Make a rap thread.
    No, the rap ventrilo idea is 1000x better. Let's flow.


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    Originally Posted by Brutus View Post
    Whoa whoa whoa, Yuzan hold on. A gruff is a type goat mang.

    Are you dat Indian niga from the 40-year old vi-rgin?
    Whoa, Whoa, Step back, let the old-gen step in
    3 huffs n' puffs n' i'll blow your house in
    outta 3 billy goat gruffs, which one you fu-ckin'?

    ya came on their hill n' stole all the grass
    now you broke again bich, gotta pay wit dat ass
    difference is i got style, you got class
    so ride the gruff's horn, yeah he pumps fast

    Never bought a prostitute on the fly?
    only way you'd get one is if she got high
    n den' u gotta get gruff off cuz yo ass kinda dry
    n when gruff was done he said, here bich, got two-ply

    n you cleaned yourself shamefully
    felt kinda gross, cum drippin out degratingly
    fosho he floated your boat, just with a little pee
    now you read this back, n ur brain be like dee dee dee~!


    Sincerely, The Champ

    P.S. one love. never ment to make your momma cry....... i am forrea! why can't we be friends?
    Yo, I like the way you start your rhymes
    May I ask where did you get those lines?
    Oh wait there mine,
    That's very kind.
    You'll find your own in time.
    Now if you don't mind. . .
    Go to hell.

    Watch out,step out.
    I'll take you out in this spout.
    Watch yo shit, just don't shout.
    Please don't pout.
    You called me out.

    What's with the "gruff"
    Is that the sound you make when you huff n' puff?
    Don't get so rough, I'll show you the real stuff.
    When I **** ya ma's muff.

    Don't worry don't hate.
    She doesn't get on till late.
    So I can take you out on a mid-day date.
    Don't get irate.
    It's all fate.
    Now bend over and open yo gate.

    With love,

    ~Yuzan.
    If I visited your profile, I probably ignored you.

    “You have to continually make choices throughout your life,whether it’s made consciously or unconsciously.
    By making a choice means that you must have also given up on something.
    If you don’t hold any regret in your choice, that means you must have made the right decision.”
    ~ Yoshida Yuzan


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    MikeGSI's Avatar Black Cops

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    U only rhymed like 2-3 times wtf?

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