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    Silencer's Avatar wat

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    This is my first shotgun. Can you guys tell me what you think?


    You're probably expecting a colourful and poetic text.

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    Looks good to me since i know nothing 'bout the knowledge of developing weapons. You can improve more though.

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    Originally Posted by Izzat Yo View Post
    Looks good to me since i know nothing 'bout the knowledge of developing weapons. You can improve more though.
    Don't say anything then.



    Besides. The verst and faces do look good o.o
    how about the textures?

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    It missing your touch

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    Originally Posted by King Haze View Post
    Don't say anything then.



    Besides. The verst and faces do look good o.o
    how about the textures?
    No textures yet.
    You're probably expecting a colourful and poetic text.

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    Originally Posted by King Haze View Post
    Don't say anything then.



    Besides. The verst and faces do look good o.o
    how about the textures?
    Please, shut up.

    The edgeflow of it isn't smooth enough. You can improve much on placing your verts. As for the "trigger", this is humanly impossible. The trigger area is too small, a finger wouldn't fit in, and if the hand is placed on the handle of the gun, the fingers would have a hard time reaching the trigger.

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    Originally Posted by slugheady View Post
    Please, shut up.

    The edgeflow of it isn't smooth enough. You can improve much on placing your verts. As for the "trigger", this is humanly impossible. The trigger area is too small, a finger wouldn't fit in, and if the hand is placed on the handle of the gun, the fingers would have a hard time reaching the trigger.
    I agree I just noticed that.
    Can you explain what do you mean by edge flow?

    If I think i know edge flow means, doesn't all low-poly models kinda have bad edgeflow?
    You're probably expecting a colourful and poetic text.

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    Originally Posted by Silencer View Post
    I agree I just noticed that.
    Can you explain what do you mean by edge flow?

    If I think i know edge flow means, doesn't all low-poly models kinda have bad edgeflow?
    I think this is what slugheady meant

    http://www.3dtotal.com/index_tutoria...led.php?id=495

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    Lol, nice one

    Keep training, good one for ur 1st try

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    Is the trigger better now?
    You're probably expecting a colourful and poetic text.

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