New techniques

[Rhysin]

Trying out some new shit. Imo it's like a 5/10 at best, but I'd prefer if I got some honest hints on what to do differently this next try. I know text is ass. I hate doing text lol.



Any better?





Props to Taiki for rendering and naggin me for creds lol

[Nickachu]

I'd try messing around with the composition, trying to really push its limit so it doesn't look as boring anymore.
after the daring composition you can begin filling it up with fx etc to make it look even more interesting.
Also, the colors are a bit mono, so I'd suggest playing around with color schemes more because sticking to one main color is dull.

[Avatus Ifrit]

I like it. I think it would have been better with a gradient where the girl is standing inside of the spikey thingies the text is a no go for me though : / its very undefined with the amount of black it has. It might look better and be easier on the eyes with bold or something >_< or a thicker font I suppose

[Rhysin]

What color would you suggest i try to bring out?
Also, it's a man.

[Taiki]

Thanks for that shout out man.

[Crokoro]

Nice