Another signature.

[Lemonish]

[Rhysin]

I don't like the stripes on the right side. It makes it feel like it's not part of the sig. Do you have a version without them?

[SheS3xyGirl]

Like ti a lot actually. I don't mind the stripes, the font, I don't like though... I feel it shouldn't be there at all, or maybe something smaller, give it more depth in this style

[Lemonish]

What do you think ?

Might add some splatter brush to fill the white, and to make the lights that used to be on the stripes pop out more.

[GeorgeGFX]

http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/...gnature232.jpg

http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/...gnature233.jpg

http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/...gnature234.jpg

http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/...gnature235.jpg

What do you think ?

Might add some splatter brush to fill the white, and to make the lights that used to be on the stripes pop out more.

Remove those lines, it looks better without them because they make the signature look messy somehow.

Just add some splatter brushes as you said to see the outcome and maybe some c4d bubbles with a lower opacity.