CnC and help

[Aynia]

Just made this, idk what´s wrong but someting isn´t right. please help me.

[GeorgeGFX]

I never seen you trying to blend in any of your works lol.
Is it me or you fcked up the render's vision (lowered opacity?)
The flow is messed up, you gotta rework this one.

[Saiyan]

You can't see the second line of text in it.
The brushes are too visible. *especially on the anime girl*
The girl is too messed up <- can't see the lines of her boobs etc. ( NOT THATS IMPORTANT )

Lol.

Looks overall nice, but needs some changes.

6/10 for the overall image.

[Taokaka]

I never seen you trying to blend in any of your works lol.
Is it me or you fcked up the render's vision (lowered opacity?)
The flow is messed up, you gotta rework this one.

On paper its technically blended. But only with soft brushes which isn't too interesting to look at. Also the renders opacity wasn't changed he just erased the effects on top of it with a soft brush which gives off that kind of effect.

As for the CnC, its not too bad actually. The text is a little better than what you usually do so that's one step up, although the subtext is completely illegible . As George said though this lacks flow. There doesn't necessarily have to be flow in every sig but if you're not gonna flow your sig its a good idea to say away from C4D that stretch across a long distance as you've created a lot of directional conflict. The second problem with the signature is it is a little too mono chromatic. In general the colors are dull and do not contrast the render in anyway making it less appealing to look at. I would suggest trying to add some more color into this one or the next to avoid this.

Overall not a bad attempt at all.