new gfx

[Vickachu]

tips?

[Taint]

dat is veri sxc m8
too bright in the middle, thats all im gonna say
rest is gud

[GeorgeGFX]

http://oi44.tinypic.com/2vuhlya.jpg

tips?

I don't really like the small dots around the render which you used probably to blend it?
You could fix the light source, that one looks like ghay '-'
Those green C4D lines you putted on the render aren't really causing any flow at all.
You could use some C4D's behind the render, Gaussian blur 1.0-1.5px, erase parts from the render and put C4D's in the foreground to create depth.
Overall 2/10

[Wucas Pls]

Rule of thirds plox.