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    Comments are appreciated, happy new year folks.

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    pls make sig for mr taint

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    tree in background kinda low quality or somethin idk doesnt look nice



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    Originally Posted by Jaime Pls View Post
    tree in background kinda low quality or somethin idk doesnt look nice
    It's blurred to blend the render, it's not LQ.

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    Looks epic, abstract <3

    >>> Credits to Sikk408 @ DevaintArt <<<

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    The render looks pasted somehow, maybe because it's too saturated for the background or too sharpened. And while the text looks nice, it's a bit hard to see/read, maybe a stroke or light shadows and even a dark outer glow would help. Also the bright flair doesn't go well with the background, because it seems dark for some reason, it goes well with the effects and the render tho. But those are just tiny issues.Ooverall its very appealing and thoroughly fantastic!


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    the render is 2 light while bg is 2 dark try to lighten a bit the bg or make the render a bit darker adding some shadows so it'll blend in more.

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    Looks very nice, I don't enjoy how the font looks though.

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    Originally Posted by Taint View Post
    pls make sig for mr taint
    Me see what me can do.

    Originally Posted by Jaime Pls View Post
    tree in background kinda low quality or somethin idk doesnt look nice
    Originally Posted by George View Post
    It's blurred to blend the render, it's not LQ.

    OT;
    Looks epic, abstract <3
    Thanks and yeah as George said, it's blurred.

    Originally Posted by EpicKLF View Post
    The render looks pasted somehow, maybe because it's too saturated for the background or too sharpened. And while the text looks nice, it's a bit hard to see/read, maybe a stroke or light shadows and even a dark outer glow would help. Also the bright flair doesn't go well with the background, because it seems dark for some reason, it goes well with the effects and the render tho. But those are just tiny issues.Ooverall its very appealing and thoroughly fantastic!
    Originally Posted by Arances View Post
    the render is 2 light while bg is 2 dark try to lighten a bit the bg or make the render a bit darker adding some shadows so it'll blend in more.
    Thanks. I agree, the background is very dark, but that is because it's very distracting. I had to do it to keep the attention focused on the render and the effects around it. About the text, I really did my best, if I were to make it any thicker it would've looked like crap, should try something different next time tho.

    Originally Posted by Bulbasaur View Post
    Looks very nice, I don't enjoy how the font looks though.
    Thank ya well yeah I need to work more on my abilities of making an "appealing" text.

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    Originally Posted by Lemonish View Post
    Me see what me can do.





    Thanks and yeah as George said, it's blurred. [b[(You cannot start a sentence with and. On top of that, you need to replace the comma after said with a colon. Afterwards the 'its blurred' must be put between a set of quotation marks.)[/b]





    Thanks. I agree, the background is very dark, but that is because it's very distracting. I had to do it to keep the attention focused on the render and the effects around it. About the text, I really did my best, if I were to make it any thicker it would've looked like crap, should try something different next time tho. (You overuse commas here entirely. Let me rewrite this for you. I agree that the background is very dark. But, that is because it's very distracting. I had to do it to keep the attention focused bothon the render and onthe effects around it. About the text; I really did my best. If I were to make it any thicker it would have looked like crap. Although, I should try something different next time.)



    Thank ya well yeah I need to work more on my abilities of making an "appealing" text. This is just a horrible mess. Put the word appealing in single quotations seeing as it is not a direct quotation of something.
    Due to your signature I felt this was necessary.
    Not to be pedantic or anything.
    Hello.
    i was buggin on an insane trip, my wifey showed me the light==
    soul elevation thru the twin flame tip, yeah, it just us, we are feeling so right
    in pursuit of justice from spaceships, we will always be whole in our Sameness
    sewn like seeds of a star, on our wayback to Oasis
    doing good deeds from a far, destroying the matrix
    WE are not caught up in the matrix
    WE have no fear, escaping that trick be so basic
    this is our world, let us stage it
    learn to love yourselves, then re arrange it
    blessed, we have the chance to give others sight
    we know trueth and what's wrong from what right
    doin due diligence, burning the midnight oil all night
    my wings are growing, aye embrace hers and take flight

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    Originally Posted by Buddhism View Post
    Hello.
    Hi.
    I chose this signature because it makes me laugh the way Scar says it.
    On the commas thing, it's not like I'm writing an essay or something.
    And I really don't see how using (") instead of (') is a horrible mess, when EpicKLF said my art piece is appealing as a whole, including the text. Yes it is not direct, but it is quoted.
    But still, thanks. I like to interact with people who are better than me in English, as it is not really my main language.
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