Second ediT

[Prone]

The sync is slightly off, but I like it

[Hulk]

Nice edit just the brightness at the start needs improvment

[Rogelio]

Nice Aiming bro

[cabel]

-CC doesn't match, weird enough
-Intro is pausing every now and then (you moving your camera position then stopping suddenly, then doing it again)
-The slow mo is killing it, intro is too long and slow
-Shots are fast (sound-wise)
-Tick "Light" option in-game

if you need a cc for your edits you know where you can find me, just ask for it and ill make you one

Im using slow mo and fast mo because im trying to sync the shots with the song otherwise I have no idea how to sync them

[Scar]

It's a good edit but the intro before you get in to the fight is a little to long, your work is getting better keep it up and soon you'll be making frags like the pros!

[Arances]

intro sucks

[Elicar]

Keep improving.

[KingDestructo]

For a second edit, this is actually not bad. Keep trying and take everyone's advices and your third will be better than your second, and so on.

[TheWiped]

Best.