Second ediT

[cabel]

So I tried to use your suggestions about my first edit for example: archetype , colors, slow motion and syncing shots, on this one
I hope this one is better than last time, write your suggestions please
ty and watch in hd

[Mike]

such edit many wow

[Opeth]

when you want to sync your shots or anything else then you need to remove the sound of the clip and replace the sound hits at the exact moment when you shoot, also the intro was way too long and next time tick the light map before frapsing the replay

[Gibby]

Pretty good, but you could do better on this one ^^

[Oink]

the gunshots doesn't go well with the music tbh you can do better

[Fadi]

-use better colours
-tick the light map as Opeth said
-use this tutorial for the black flashes http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BybWn1umcKw
-dont make the hit sound faster

[cabel]

ty for the suggestions guys I'll try next time!

[vendko1]

Not bad ,i suggest to choose a good music background while u hitting...

[Taint]

-CC doesn't match, weird enough
-Intro is pausing every now and then (you moving your camera position then stopping suddenly, then doing it again)
-The slow mo is killing it, intro is too long and slow
-Shots are fast (sound-wise)
-Tick "Light" option in-game

if you need a cc for your edits you know where you can find me, just ask for it and ill make you one

[Mex]

Nice edit cabel. .............................................