What should I add or changed?

[Finx]

What Should I take out or adjust or add? Im stuck :x









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[Adopt]

it's awesome xd !
u dont need to put anything again

[EpicKLF]

Idk, it just doesn't feel right, tone done a little bit on the color and sharpen everything and then blur some parts to give depth, like the legs perhaps? it still is a bit too complicated for me...

[Finx]

Idk, it just doesn't feel right, tone done a little bit on the color and sharpen everything and then blur some parts to give depth, like the legs perhaps? it still is a bit too complicated for me...

I'll wait for some more.

[Osuu]

The colors are too... "forced". I'm guessing you put a purple to orange gradient map? Try decreasing the opacity 'cause atm it's wayyy to dark. Also the corners/edges of the render is too sharp, it doesn't blend with the back ground. Try to blur the edges and see if that helps.

Good luck

[Finx]

The colors are too... "forced". I'm guessing you put a purple to orange gradient map? Try decreasing the opacity 'cause atm it's wayyy to dark. Also the corners/edges of the render is too sharp, it doesn't blend with the back ground. Try to blur the edges and see if that helps.

Good luck

Oki doki

[Layne]

lacks bras and panties

[Finx]

lacks bras and panties

Lacks beauty behind personality ^

Okay, phew, >_<"


What should I fix / change now

[A Tissue]

The only problem that I see with this is that the color is bad and so is the render. Try not to spam the signature with C4Ds, it looks awful when you do it.

[Rhysin]

Ignore A tissue's cnc because it was virtually worthless. People should never be forced to change their canvas if they decided they want to use it. Anyway, it's a bit over saturated and contrast seems a bit high. Softer colors would work wonder. A bit more blending between the bg and render would make it feel more like they belong there. Some edges are a bit too crisp.