Lol, people be all like too sharp too dark. It is supposed to be that way folks. I like the darkness and the sharpness and it gives the signature a unique style overall. For me it's just the text, if I were you I would've made it bold as to make contrast with the signature as a whole. You know the signature is sharp and has small details, I think it'd look cool if the text were bold and thick. It is a nice try and it doesn't suck at all.
