Testing another style

[Osuu]

So it's kinda my first time trying something like this :p

watch'ya think?

[Lorrainé]

Looks pretty cool in my opinion =D
Try making the text more transparent/smaller sized and don't put it in the middle where it kind of blocks a little of the render, I think the text is a little bright but idk that's just my opinion. It also looks a little blurry (text) ;-;

[Osuu]

Looks pretty cool in my opinion =D
Try making the text more transparent/smaller sized and don't put it in the middle where it kind of blocks a little of the render, I think the text is a little bright but idk that's just my opinion. It also looks a little blurry (text) ;-;

The blur on the text was for the glowy effect :p

Also, the text would be bad if it was small and hidden at some corner D: But I'll keep it in mind

[Lorrainé]

The blur on the text was for the glowy effect :p

Also, the text would be bad if it was small and hidden at some corner D: But I'll keep it in mind

Oo I see now xd
Awww ;-; I mean, I don't know much about photoshopping and all, meaning don't take much advice from me but out of curiosity I'm trying to imagine how the text would look that way but if it looks terrible as to what you have stated then don't do it jaja

[Camel]

Increase the shadow of the text.

[Arances]

I would move the text a bit more to the left since it blocks the render a bit and the left side looks empty.

[Azuki]

http://i.imgur.com/SiFLTu2.png

So it's kinda my first time trying something like this :p

watch'ya think?

the black border shape on the upper and lower part. stretch it more so it won't leave something kinda called 'space'
and uhm don't put inner glow on the text though. and make it a little darker. the render I mean. overall its pretty cool. and 'cause it's araragi-kun <3

[Sterfy]

I know text isn't your strong suit, so I'm not gonna comment on that XD
It looks great, but try to blend the render more - bottom half it fits really well but the top half isn't as well done.
Also the background on the left looks pretty bland ;3

overall, its great

[EpicKLF]

I really like this one, the colours, texture and render are actually good. But contrary to what you think, The text should be on the left in my opinion, but not shrunk or changed just nudged about 8 pixels. Overall its just fantastic

[Osuu]

@people commenting on simplicity

The whole goal of this style and theme for me was to work on simplicity and usage of space. I kept any effect/feature on the sides to a minimum. :p