I need senpai

[Azuki]

http://puu.sh/9BUh5/8f344e9315.png

'-'?

much better. it's the lightings in here that's missing all in all its good !

[Lemonish]

K HOE. I'ma Cnc the second one. +'s are good sheit -'s are fuk u.

+ Color choice: these colors can be a great combination, here they aren't because you misused them like a roasted piece of banana penis.<3<3
end of +. nub.

- Depth: It's ****ed up really, maybe it's the render but still, I think you blurred the bottom of the render which was a mistake because it's so obvious and I think his hand needs to be very sharp in order to make it look like it's really facing the screen.
- Lightening: There are random lights all over the place, I suggest you don't lighten up the splatters but use the "lightening effects" feature in prodoshop to get some proper lightening. (Usually focal point is brightest -> Face?/Text)
- Render choice: LITERALLY NOOB. This render is no good, try to search some better renders or join some GFX forums they always post the best render packs. It doesn't have a flow/color scheme gg.

Don't mean to be rude ya know, just follow some baka tutorials. He's a great artist and I think you can use some of his experience. ALSHO, get some packs of random lights/fractals and start using them to make cool stuffffff.

Baka: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCjK...ASJrIWQ9H-i5mA

[GeorgeGFX]

Hello Sonji-chan '-'
If you like this style, hit me up and I'll give you some lessons



You should have added some foreground effects though, not only in the background but overall I like ok.

[Sonji]

Hello Sonji-chan '-'
If you like this style, hit me up and I'll give you some lessons

http://puu.sh/9BXvt/fd0d2b8128.png

You should have added some foreground effects though, not only in the background but overall I like ok.

Look at the latest one on the first post now :o, and PM Lessons to me

[Sonji]

I followed another tutorial '-'

[Brisk]

go back to copy and paste please

[Lemonish]

go back to copy and paste please

I wish there was a dislike button.

[Sonji]

I wish you told me what's wrong with it instead of simply saying "dislike" '-'

[Lemonish]

I wish you told me what's wrong with it instead of simply saying "dislike" '-'

You're silly. I was commenting on his comment. The dislike is for "go back to copy and paste"...

[Sonji]

You're silly. I was commenting on his comment. The dislike is for "go back to copy and paste"...

Then what do you think of the newer one '-'