I need senpai

[Sonji]

I follow tutorials '-'







cnc ok
please tell me/link me to tutorials on how to do things '-'

[Azuki]

I follow tutorials '-'

http://puu.sh/9BRbn/a7f188e413.png
http://puu.sh/9BRqw/aae4151349.png
cnc ok
please tell me/link me to tutorials on how to do things '-'

the first one I think, the smudge is heavy here, try using a brush around 13-14px 70% opac. I like the colors tho you too much darken the area around Izaya which is wearing a black coat.

the second one. I like the splatters, but same as the first one, your lighting, and your Jiraiya render looks like 'clipped'.

^ just my opinion though.

[Sonji]

the first one I think, the smudge is heavy here, try using a brush around 13-14px 70% opac. I like the colors tho you too much darken the area around Izaya which is wearing a black coat.

the second one. I like the splatters, but same as the first one, your lighting, and your Jiraiya render looks like 'clipped'.

^ just my opinion though.

Is going dark around a dark area bad o.O? I honestly tried to smudge the back of jacket to make it blend into it and I agree i did go heavy with darkening most things but hey '-' Tha'ts wh Ihave saved psds to fix things.

[Azuki]

Is going dark around a dark area bad o.O? I honestly tried to smudge the back of jacket to make it blend into it and I agree i did go heavy with darkening most things but hey '-' That's why I Have saved psds to fix things.

Is going dark around a dark area bad? - Yes, you must focus on your render or the render itself. you must use your render as your focal.

[Sonji]

Is going dark around a dark area bad? - Yes, you must focus on your render or the render itself. you must use your render as your focal.

Well then I'll take note in that '-'
Is this a good fix for Jiraiya :o?

[Azuki]

Well then I'll take note in that '-'
Is this a good fix for Jiraiya :o?
http://puu.sh/9BSBi/a7c7b0082a.png

a little dark around the render an a little light on the render, and make your render to blend with the background so it'll not have the 'clipped' effect.

[EpicKLF]

It is very good, it just feels too dark on the edges like saka said. But your other version is a lot better too. The renders still seem "pasted" on the wallpaper, try and add some effects over the render like a splatter brush for the second one maybe? I don't blame you on the first since that particular render of izaya is horrible even with my attempt. Overall, keep working at it, its looking quite good so far!

[Lemonish]

K HOE. I'ma Cnc the second one. +'s are good sheit -'s are fuk u.

+ Color choice: these colors can be a great combination, here they aren't because you misused them like a roasted piece of banana penis.<3<3
end of +. nub.

- Depth: It's ****ed up really, maybe it's the render but still, I think you blurred the bottom of the render which was a mistake because it's so obvious and I think his hand needs to be very sharp in order to make it look like it's really facing the screen.
- Lightening: There are random lights all over the place, I suggest you don't lighten up the splatters but use the "lightening effects" feature in prodoshop to get some proper lightening. (Usually focal point is brightest -> Face?/Text)
- Render choice: LITERALLY NOOB. This render is no good, try to search some better renders or join some GFX forums they always post the best render packs. It doesn't have a flow/color scheme gg.

Don't mean to be rude ya know, just follow some baka tutorials. He's a great artist and I think you can use some of his experience. ALSHO, get some packs of random lights/fractals and start using them to make cool stuffffff.

Baka: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCjK...ASJrIWQ9H-i5mA

[GeorgeGFX]

Hello Sonji-chan '-'
If you like this style, hit me up and I'll give you some lessons



You should have added some foreground effects though, not only in the background but overall I like ok.

[Sonji]

Hello Sonji-chan '-'
If you like this style, hit me up and I'll give you some lessons

http://puu.sh/9BXvt/fd0d2b8128.png

You should have added some foreground effects though, not only in the background but overall I like ok.

Look at the latest one on the first post now :o, and PM Lessons to me