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    Resort's Avatar Aloha

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    I'm just naming then randomly, called this one Felicity by me "Resort".

    I'd like it if you could tell me what you think of it, and if you think it's better than my first one.

    Any feedback on how I could improve it would help.

    New song - Felicity - https://soundcloud.com/resortfg/resort-felicity

    Previous song - Euphoria - https://soundcloud.com/resortfg/sandrude-dastorm

    Is my new one better? if not how come.


    Thanks.

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    Stuwadie's Avatar I Am Half Retarded

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    not my type of music , sorry cannot rate it

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    Resort's Avatar Aloha

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    Originally Posted by Stuwadie View Post
    not my type of music , sorry cannot rate it
    Fair.

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    EpicKLF's Avatar Why am i purple?...

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    This all really depends on the type of music people like to listen to, so ill try and be fair, so to be honest. i prefer your first just to just how the rhythm sounds in general, your latest one has more use of effects but that doesnt help the already un-harmonic tune. but both your songs in general sound "mono" and linear, no ambiance or a change of tune in the song itself (like an addition of a new instrument or a different beat half way) But this is normal for a beginner, im actually surprised you managed to make 2 songs because i cant for the life of me; make one myself. Keep it up and you will improve. i actually like the upbeat 8-bit remix vibe of your songs


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    Originally Posted by EpicKLF View Post
    This all really depends on the type of music people like to listen to, so ill try and be fair, so to be honest. i prefer your first just to just how the rhythm sounds in general, your latest one has more use of effects but that doesnt help the already un-harmonic tune. but both your songs in general sound "mono" and linear, no ambiance or a change of tune in the song itself (like an addition of a new instrument or a different beat half way) But this is normal for a beginner, im actually surprised you managed to make 2 songs because i cant for the life of me; make one myself. Keep it up and you will improve. i actually like the upbeat 8-bit remix vibe of your songs
    I'm personally not to happy with how the bassline sounds though, I did have a bit of trouble making it sound decent.

    I'm also stuck for which VST's and Plugins to use that give good sounding sound.

    I do know that GFX is much easier than making music though xD.
    Last edited by Resort; 09-29-2014 at 08:01 PM.

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    Colour's Avatar PvE, because why not?!

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    The first one sounds better to me, though i must say it's not really my type of music.
    Howerver you might want to add some more different instruments in it like EpicKLF mentioned.

    None the less it's good

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    Resort's Avatar Aloha

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    Originally Posted by von_kram View Post
    The first one sounds better to me, though i must say it's not really my type of music.
    Howerver you might want to add some more different instruments in it like EpicKLF mentioned.

    None the less it's good
    Yeah I understand it's not everyones type of music, so it makes it hard to comment, I just really like the hype of hands up styled music

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    This song sounded much more better than your first one

    You synced it better than the first one making it sound way better

    If you had synced your first one too that would sound better than this one

    None the less great job !

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    u need more power
    like Dillon Francis - Bounce or GTA - CAKE

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    I like it.

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