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[DeadSoul]

Its Fantastic

[Michi]

I know nothing about edit,

I like this. Weed out all the unnecessary clips and it would be a decent vid.

That, and make it more dramatic like that makes me wanna keep watching it. Those little camera turns etc you did were awesome. Keep that up, and that sound is gonna make my ears bleed. Other than that you improved alot and don't stop, you will definitely get better bab. Glad you listen to feedback aswell, others tend to not listen and get butthurt when someone says something wrong about it. q-q

[senpai]

only leave hit sounds in when you can all hit every clip

[Gemi]

I like this. Weed out all the unnecessary clips and it would be a decent vid.

You mean weed out everything? LEL SshangG SOKKKKKKK

Keep improving and dont get lazy

[Spire]

turn down the Sound effects or the gunz and maybe fast forward through some of the less intense moments ie 'reloading and medding, and maybe a few more slow mo i personally like the way that this guy edits his gunz vids he was 8urgz on ijji i don't believe he plays anymore though. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3qrpLfdXRY8 and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dNxhcpWKbGI I saw your other 2 clips and you have greatly improved keep pushing and you will keep getting better

[Chimera]

Good Job.

[Camel]

the shooting sound is so damn annoying man

This. but yeah you improved alot good job and keep going.

[^EGod^9]

Nice Video.

[Trisha Tan]

Like i said, i am really thankful to ppl who watched this and my previous vids. And i am really trying to take note on the suggestions
So that i could improve more, i did not know that this could be really welcoming... ...

[Colour]

Indeed you have improved a lot, now just find a way to get rid of the annoying sounds and edit them to some better ones. Other then that there were indeed some less significent frags in there that could have been disposed of, other then that i really liked it also the music was way better then in your other clips.