Second Version c;

[Skilly]

i don't like it rofl, but im sure your next frag will be much better!

Hope so, that's why I'm asking for some feedback, trying to make something that hopefully everyone can enjoy watching

[Olifant]

Hope so, that's why I'm asking for some feedback, trying to make something that hopefully everyone can enjoy watching

Well, they gave you some good advise, i'm pretty sure you will improve your work man

[Camel]

Uploaded! Replay

[ijramist]

idk about this, once again, would like some feedback c;
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6zK6...ature=youtu.be

Sorry, I didn't like it.
As you can see in the beginning... The 3d motion track text wasn't stable, try to make it more suitable, I recommend you to watch this tutorial to make your 3d motion track text much perfect: http://youtu.be/R-xDtzBQ34s
In addition, The colors and the sound effects are really horrible, try to work on that too.

Good luck

[Sigma]

worst thing ever seen

[Tzunami best0]

pegboards nerds beasts

[Carlo]

DAMN Hit Sound EFFECT! lmao!

[Skilly]

Sorry, I didn't like it.
As you can see in the beginning... The 3d motion track text wasn't stable, try to make it more suitable, I recommend you to watch this tutorial to make your 3d motion track text much perfect: http://youtu.be/R-xDtzBQ34s
In addition, The colors and the sound effects are really horrible, try to work on that too.

Good luck

I actually did watch some tutorials on Motion Tracking so hopefully I can do a bit better, I will use rap music on the next version as Zexi suggested, for the colours, yeah, still trying to experiment and find the perfect combination xd thanks.

[lex210607]

Damn, those shot noises are awesome imo! This could be due to the fact I'm a firework addict. Great job!

[Skilly]

heres the 3rd test tried out some stuff, I believe my motion tracking is also slightly better, both clips are from straits replay pack which was reuploaded above by zexi :0