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    Boostage123's Avatar Junior Member

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    Originally Posted by Again View Post
    1. Waar is de beat van, vermelden zou wel netjes zijn
    2. geef stephan wel gelijk, zeker bij de hook wanneer je domme shit zegt leg je de klemtoon op een maffe plek imo
    3. het begon best oké, daarna ging het wel minder, toen je constant fokkin begon te zeggen was het voor mij wel een beetje afgelopen

    verder, blijf proberen kan altijd beter
    1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHRJpqbFO8k
    2. Rap al een tijdje, en volgens mij is het gewoon mijn style
    3. Zal er aan werken om minder scheldwoorden in me rap tekst te zetten, thanks voor de kritiek!

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    Again's Avatar Fresher to Death

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    Originally Posted by Boostage123 View Post
    1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHRJpqbFO8k
    2. Rap al een tijdje, en volgens mij is het gewoon mijn style
    3. Zal er aan werken om minder scheldwoorden in me rap tekst te zetten, thanks voor de kritiek!
    gaat niet on de scheldwoorden man, je gebruikte het gewoon te vaak achter elkaar... waardoor je rijm vast leek te zitten tot dat je overging op 'Ring'
    Turn a GOLDEN boy into GREEN.
    Again4FM


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    Originally Posted by Sunfire View Post
    When you dont understand anything but u know its shit anyways cuz u heard him rap in English

    https://media.giphy.com/media/P4jzJOE11IARa/giphy.gif
    Got a shot that I hit now.
    Believe me brother, who beat I have now done again.
    I put the game on a whole different level.
    No ****** is now touching at my ****ing flow.
    Who does that, then has a ****ing problem.
    Stand up for yourself, **** the ****ing system.
    The system ****s your ****ing brain.
    The system makes you ****ing insane.
    So **** everything and go for it.
    Many setbacks but illhamoudla I never lost
    That was because I said **** you said and went for it.
    I stopped hanging out with criminals just for a ring.
    which is nothing more than wasting your time.
    You know that, I could get in these days killed.
    but i didnt do that cause im on smart shit.
    Time was trying to get me stuck but I'm not a ****ing bitch.


    1:03 chorus


    We're done with that stupid shit.
    Not ready for a ****ing tip.

    Not ready but were still ****ing ready.
    For my ******s I'm a daily murderer. 2x

    ROBEL TEXT 2: 1:26

    you didnt know i did these things.
    You didnt know i wrote things.
    You can never know because you never have re-lifed my life.
    Even you had done that you would of not survive.
    In my life, I'veseen unpleasant things.
    And that's ****t up because I'm only 17.
    Best friend lost and I was just ****ing 10.
    lockt up father and I was only 15.
    problems with men and I was only 16.
    Had i reviewed my life earlier..
    Because how it goes is not so bad now.
    You know, I do not go along in the sea.
    But I do not give up, because giving is no choice.
    you have to behave like a proud man, not nervous.
    If you do, you ****ing go down.
    Believe me, you will be seen as a clown.
    If you do not want then you should go through.
    Think of it as a hobby, not a permanent job.
    I know every ****** of the mother****ing street.
    Push the white making the state angry.

    CHORUS
    We're done with that stupid shit.
    Not ready for a ****ing tip.

    Not ready but were still ****ing ready.
    For my ******s I'm a daily murderer. 2x



    Lyric in english just for you
    Last edited by Boostage123; 07-22-2016 at 12:56 PM.

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    Originally Posted by Boostage123 View Post
    Got a shot that I hit now.
    Believe me brother, who beat I have now done again.
    I put the game on a whole different level.
    No ****** is now touching at my ****ing flow.
    Who does that, then has a ****ing problem.
    Stand up for yourself, **** the ****ing system.
    The system ****s your ****ing brain.
    The system makes you ****ing insane.
    So **** everything and go for it.
    Many setbacks but illhamoudla I never lost
    That was because I said **** you said and went for it.
    I stopped hanging out with criminals just for a ring.
    which is nothing more than wasting your time.
    You know that, I could get in these days killed.
    but i didnt do that cause im on smart shit.
    Time was trying to get me stuck but I'm not a ****ing bitch.


    1:03 chorus


    We're done with that stupid shit.
    Not ready for a ****ing tip.

    Not ready but were still ****ing ready.
    For my ******s I'm a daily murderer. 2x

    ROBEL TEXT 2: 1:26

    you didnt know i did these things.
    You didnt know i wrote things.
    You can never know because you never have re-lifed my life.
    Even you had done that you would of not survive.
    In my life, I'veseen unpleasant seen.
    And that's ****t up because I'm only 17.
    Best friend lost and I was just ****ing 10.
    lockt up father and I was only 15.
    problems with men and I was only 16.
    Had i reviewed my life earlier..
    Because how it goes is not so bad now.
    You know, I do not go along in the sea.
    But I do not give up, because giving is no choice.
    you have to behave like a proud man, not nervous.
    If you do, you ****ing go down.
    Believe me, you will be seen as a clown.
    If you do not want then you should go through.
    Think of it as a hobby, not a permanent job.
    I know every ****** of the mother****ing street.
    Push the white making the state angry.

    CHORUS
    We're done with that stupid shit.
    Not ready for a ****ing tip.

    Not ready but were still ****ing ready.
    For my ******s I'm a daily murderer. 2x



    Lyric in english just for you





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    Originally Posted by Boostage123 View Post
    Got a shot that I hit now.
    Believe me brother, who beat I have now done again.
    I put the game on a whole different level.
    No ****** is now touching at my ****ing flow.
    Who does that, then has a ****ing problem.
    Stand up for yourself, **** the ****ing system.
    The system ****s your ****ing brain.
    The system makes you ****ing insane.
    So **** everything and go for it.
    Many setbacks but illhamoudla I never lost
    That was because I said **** you said and went for it.
    I stopped hanging out with criminals just for a ring.
    which is nothing more than wasting your time.
    You know that, I could get in these days killed.
    but i didnt do that cause im on smart shit.
    Time was trying to get me stuck but I'm not a ****ing bitch.


    1:03 chorus


    We're done with that stupid shit.
    Not ready for a ****ing tip.

    Not ready but were still ****ing ready.
    For my ******s I'm a daily murderer. 2x

    ROBEL TEXT 2: 1:26

    you didnt know i did these things.
    You didnt know i wrote things.
    You can never know because you never have re-lifed my life.
    Even you had done that you would of not survive.
    In my life, I'veseen unpleasant things.
    And that's ****t up because I'm only 17.
    Best friend lost and I was just ****ing 10.
    lockt up father and I was only 15.
    problems with men and I was only 16.
    Had i reviewed my life earlier..
    Because how it goes is not so bad now.
    You know, I do not go along in the sea.
    But I do not give up, because giving is no choice.
    you have to behave like a proud man, not nervous.
    If you do, you ****ing go down.
    Believe me, you will be seen as a clown.
    If you do not want then you should go through.
    Think of it as a hobby, not a permanent job.
    I know every ****** of the mother****ing street.
    Push the white making the state angry.

    CHORUS
    We're done with that stupid shit.
    Not ready for a ****ing tip.

    Not ready but were still ****ing ready.
    For my ******s I'm a daily murderer. 2x



    Lyric in english just for you

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    Stuwadie's Avatar I Am Half Retarded

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    Waar is de video hoor alleen instrumental mijn bars zijn als vuur me teksten zijn zo hard als een muur me vip op forum is duur


    Booom

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    Originally Posted by Stuwadie View Post
    Waar is de video hoor alleen instrumental mijn bars zijn als vuur me teksten zijn zo hard als een muur me vip op forum is duur


    Booom
    Ik was gewoon de tekst aan het rappen met de instrumental aan van me pc. met de ipad gerecord. miss ga ik dit in een studio recorden waardoor het 10000x beter klinkt

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    Stuwadie's Avatar I Am Half Retarded

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    Je moet geen 5 euro kut mic gebruiken als je dat wel doet moet je white noise reduction erin zetten en nog meer aanpassingen ligt eraan welke progamma je gebruikt

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    heel goed je bent getalenteerd rapper je mooie toekomst!

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    jullie allemaal kleine spaghetti wapens kinderen

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