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    Originally Posted by avivkm1994 View Post
    Can you guys draw lines on the draw please so I can understand ?
    Please~
    Sorry >.<
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    Thanks guys !

    Re-draw this (red circles) and add the top of her head, its cut now.. :c

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    Originally Posted by StephanM View Post
    https://puu.sh/rpK1R/10dda5bf16.jpg
    Re-draw this (red circles) and add the top of her head, its cut now.. :c
    I meant like, draw in the way you saw it XD

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    Originally Posted by avivkm1994 View Post
    I meant like, draw in the way you saw it XD
    You could copy the other foot and flip it?
    I cannot draw noses but just try a few noses?

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    Originally Posted by avivkm1994 View Post
    Can you guys draw lines on the draw please so I can understand ?
    You can already see what you did wrong if you compare your drawing to the screenshot of your character.
    You twisted the pose at the upper body / belly where suddenly she twists the opposite way, her hip wouldnt be angled this way.
    The left foot even if angled more (which i dont think a girl stands with her feet that much angled outward) would still be mostly head on and not sideways.

    One thing artists do (be it for animating, modeling or drawing) constantly take reference and even do the pose or movement themselfs in order to understand how the body would move and look, pose that way / do the movement yourself when you have trouble drawing something.

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    Look sexy
    Good job !

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    Originally Posted by HellSniper View Post
    You can already see what you did wrong if you compare your drawing to the screenshot of your character.
    You twisted the pose at the upper body / belly where suddenly she twists the opposite way, her hip wouldnt be angled this way.
    The left foot even if angled more (which i dont think a girl stands with her feet that much angled outward) would still be mostly head on and not sideways.

    One thing artists do (be it for animating, modeling or drawing) constantly take reference and even do the pose or movement themselfs in order to understand how the body would move and look, pose that way / do the movement yourself when you have trouble drawing something.
    Yeah , I understand you, I just cant stand copy pasting >.<

    Originally Posted by StephanM View Post
    You could copy the other foot and flip it?
    I cannot draw noses but just try a few noses?
    flip foot ?
    and I dont get whats wrong with the nose ? too big ? not in place o-o ?

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    Look sexy
    Good job !
    thanks ~!

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    let this game die

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    Nice drawing fam

    Credits to GeorgčGFX for this beautiful signature

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    Originally Posted by avivkm1994 View Post
    Yeah , I understand you, I just cant stand copy pasting >.<
    The comparison to the screenshot isnt about tracing and replicating the same posture (which is what you mean with copy pasting i assume), its about how a body would look in a similiar pose / a working perspective.
    One other thing i can point out, the face/head is drawn in a rather flat way while the rest of the body has some depth to it which makes it look really weird.

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    I think it looks great, as I get to see almost all off your progress, lel. You've really went ham with this, and it looks alot better. Keep on going, mi amigo.

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