I need senpai

[Sonji]

a little dark around the render an a little light on the render, and make your render to blend with the background so it'll not have the 'clipped' effect.

Trying to remember things I picked up from tutorials ;o not sure how to make it not seemed "clipped" any advice :o that's my attempt on trying to fix it

It is very good, it just feels too dark on the edges like saka said. But your other version is a lot better too. The renders still seem "pasted" on the wallpaper, try and add some effects over the render like a splatter brush for the second one maybe? I don't blame you on the first since that particular render of izaya is horrible even with

my attempt. Overall, keep working at it, its looking quite good so far!

I thought i recgonized the render :o thank you