Ok, right not as stunning as your WoW. (Mainly because of the C4D's)...
Positives; Text, Lighting
Negitives; Flow... - I think the way the C4D's were set-out didnt go with the flow of the render.
What could be improved;
Lighting - Could have it so it lights up your focal area (area on render, or render itself, i.e face). Its given me the impression that she's hiding in that shadows of the c4d's
