Hmm, you executed the light part and flow well, yet i dislike it.
i suggest to follow some effect tutorials at gfxvoid.com
and/or smudging tutorials, to make them better.
also the colors are very monotone, in this case you only used orange. ( Or red w/e it is xD ) So it could be good to use for example Light blue or pink or w/e, whatever floats ur boat to get some colors going on wich kills the monotone-ness.
Once you've done that, just add a couple of photo filters and gradient maps so that the colors match eachother.
hope this helps
