Karui [Banner]

[Joobie]

looks good.
Good Job on the banner.

[Pulse]

Since you didn't respond before, I'll just tell you what's wrong with it anyway:

The banner itself is an "alright" size, and render-placement is fine. However, the pen-tooling looks very cartoon-ish and doesn't lend itself well to the kind of banner that I assume you're attempting to create. Make the pen-tooling more realistic, or it distracts and just kills the banner. On top of that, the most apparent thing is that it's low quality. Furthermore, your text-placement is fine, but you put Karui twice. Why? You should have kept the masked "Karui" and chosen a different text to write smaller below it. C4D spammed background is always a no-no in my opinion, but whatever.

I don't rate because it's ignorant.

[Historia]

Since you didn't respond before, I'll just tell you what's wrong with it anyway:

The banner itself is an "alright" size, and render-placement is fine. However, the pen-tooling looks very cartoon-ish and doesn't lend itself well to the kind of banner that I assume you're attempting to create. Make the pen-tooling more realistic, or it distracts and just kills the banner. On top of that, the most apparent thing is that it's low quality. Furthermore, your text-placement is fine, but you put Karui twice. Why? You should have kept the masked "Karui" and chosen a different text to write smaller below it. C4D spammed background is always a no-no in my opinion, but whatever.

I don't rate because it's ignorant.

What he said

[Karui]

Since you didn't respond before, I'll just tell you what's wrong with it anyway:

The banner itself is an "alright" size, and render-placement is fine. However, the pen-tooling looks very cartoon-ish and doesn't lend itself well to the kind of banner that I assume you're attempting to create. Make the pen-tooling more realistic, or it distracts and just kills the banner. On top of that, the most apparent thing is that it's low quality. Furthermore, your text-placement is fine, but you put Karui twice. Why? You should have kept the masked "Karui" and chosen a different text to write smaller below it. C4D spammed background is always a no-no in my opinion, but whatever.

I don't rate because it's ignorant.

that render is a design by a person wich idk who, but that render just was uploaded from a paper that why this got bad quality

hope you understand me englesh

[Uhtux]

amazing

[Ekital]

that render is a design by a person wich idk who, but that render just was uploaded from a paper that why this got bad quality

hope you understand me englesh

He didnt actually mean a pen... he means the pen tool which was used to render the picture and yea the rendering wasn't done by you so I doubt you can really blame yourself about that .