to empty for me
Yes, it is quite empty but it would be better if you make it a bit smaller.
That is just an opinion.
Ow My God! I like that so bad! o.o
You're good! 10/10, if possible 20/10
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I like the pigeon more than the stock / render of her (if you rendered it, I give you brownie points. Doesn't look like you did though), though the little pink line on the pigeon is kind of weird, but that's whatever. The little floral / tribal design coming from her left arm, though, is distracting from the focal which should be her. The light source is fine but it doesn't seem like she is connected to it, which is what I'm assuming was your intention. Putting the text up at the top would distract further from her, and I would recommend putting it somewhere closer, almost on her. Perhaps using the pigeon some how? I'm not sure exactly where it would go, but putting it at the top probably wouldn't be your best option. There is also a lot of contrast between dark and light, and it seems exceedingly bright. I suggest dimming it down a bit, because the brightness is hard on the eyes at the moment.
Basically: Fix how she is connected to the light source; Measure your options with text; Fix the parts that take away from the focus; Fix the brightness.
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