Cnc! :P

[Pulse]

please do, At least i can listen to your opinion and i will try and remember it for my next one.

Shouldn't the GFX team be helping me out?

[Boss]

Shouldn't the GFX team be helping me out?

Define GFX.

[JShaya]

Shouldn't the GFX team be helping me out?

Yes that's my point, i want to try and get people more involved.

[Pulse]

Yes that's my point, i want to try and get people more involved.

The problem is there should be no GFX team.

Anyway, on with my CnC.

Text: Bad choice of text in general. Don't pick fonts that are super fancy. It should fit the them, but not be distracting. Too high of an opacity on it, and the glow is strong. Makes it look too rounded when a sharper font would be better. It is also poorly placed. It should be somewhere on or near the render in this case, with a low opacity, in order to keep from distracting from the focal.

Background: Too chaotic, and your attempts at flow are horrible. Especially, considering, that your attempt at a focal (the girl) doesn't contribute to the flow in any way other than make it look worse.

Focal: I probably shouldn't even call this a focal considering the fact that the text draws somebody in more, but we'll go with it. Your focal is too far away from the background in terms of depth. Although there are no shadows, it looks as though you just slapped the render on the background and maybe added some gradient maps. That may not be what you did, but it is what one thinks at a glance.

Lighting: Bad. There is no real light source, and the only thing that I could see as an attempt at one would be the part to the right of her, which is in the wrong direction, or the little steam to her left. Either way, both are bad.

Depth: Like I said before, bad. There are no shadows and it's too chaotic to really have depth.

I don't rate because it's what the ignorant do.