[Smoke effect] First test.

[Loky]

Hi,

Here are 2 pictures which I've made a while ago, I know im not that good in Photoshop but im still learning it.
Give me some feedback; Positive or negative as long as its not rude.

[Luneth]

its nice, maybe you can make the text a bit more smokey?
2nd one is better

[Loky]

its nice, maybe you can make the text a bit more smokey?
2nd one is better

Thank-you, I cant make it more smoky because my image is flatted ._.

[Luneth]

oh.. Hmm.. idk

[Loky]

oh.. Hmm.. idk

Anyways, thanks for your advice.

[StephanM]

Some parts in the smoke look cut off.
And if I am not mistaken the second one is just a negative of the first one? (opposite colours)

[Loky]

Some parts in the smoke look cut off.
And if I am not mistaken the second one is just a negative of the first one? (opposite colours)

Yes that is right it is negative, and about the cut off parts, I haven't noticed that before ..

[StephanM]

Yes that is right it is negative, and about the cut off parts, I haven't noticed that before ..

You see it better on the second image .
But overall; not bad!