This one was made by me :
This one was created by Sergio, a friend of mine :
Rate?
I'd like to see some positive critique, tell me what I could do to improve my work.
This one was made by me :
This one was created by Sergio, a friend of mine :
Rate?
I'd like to see some positive critique, tell me what I could do to improve my work.
Last edited by God Ra; 11-01-2011 at 04:10 AM.
s-uh-k.
3/10
/nohate
10/10 it look's awesome, Now teach me ;O
I don't understand c4d that well, like mainly the text.... ;'(
I made this from scratch. It was easier as I thought it would be. If you have problems with it, you should explore C4D like I did.
I will follow tuts later though so I can make better projects. This guy provides good tuts http://www.youtube.com/user/ChromeDesignsHD
Check him out.
Last edited by God Ra; 11-01-2011 at 04:19 AM.
JShaya (11-02-2011)
It's nice ! ^^ 10/10
I just made this in C4D
Rofl got msn il help you nub.
First off, there is no such thing as positive critique, especially not by me.
Even though your render looks quite decent, its really nothing much. Its just a plain wall with text pasted on it, a character that I doubt you made put on it and its done.
Your shadow is failing in the bottom right hand corner, and the copyright text looks more like gold while the big text looks more like a material without diffuse or specular.
Try to put some more time in a scene, the text is just really basic and so is the environment.
Example:
This is a render in between of a model I made, the render is alright but it could be a lot better adding something in this space.
Last edited by slugheady; 11-02-2011 at 06:13 PM.
i like the first one ..
man i wana do something like that
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