I'm rusty nowadays

[Moh]

3/10

-There is no light source/ Bad lighting ( The light is coming from the top left but in the render the light comes from top right. )

-There is no focal.

-Using drop shadow on a brush is just a bad idea.

-You can still see the ship behind the brushes and it just looks misplaced.

-The direction of flow in the brushes doesn't match with the render.

-The color scheme is just meh. Green has a really high contrast and mixing it with black makes eyes disoriented and distracts your focus from the focal.

[Ekital]

3/10

-There is no light source/ Bad lighting ( The light is coming from the top left but in the render the light comes from top right. )

-There is no focal.

-Using drop shadow on a brush is just a bad idea.

-You can still see the ship behind the brushes and it just looks misplaced.

-The direction of flow in the brushes doesn't match with the render.

-The color scheme is just meh. Green has a really high contrast and mixing it with black makes eyes disoriented and distracts your focus from the focal.

You're a bit mad aren't you?

[Moh]

You're a bit mad aren't you?

No ahaha

[Nancy]

3/10

-There is no light source/ Bad lighting ( The light is coming from the top left but in the render the light comes from top right. )

-There is no focal.

-Using drop shadow on a brush is just a bad idea.

-You can still see the ship behind the brushes and it just looks misplaced.

-The direction of flow in the brushes doesn't match with the render.

-The color scheme is just meh. Green has a really high contrast and mixing it with black makes eyes disoriented and distracts your focus from the focal.

trippin.