CnC/Rate.
more blending, it looks very boring and simple atm
The background is to dark in my eyes
Render is to dark , u need to make it a bit brighter to have ppl focus on it.
Font and just white doesnt rly fits the background
6/10
Hmm it's a good concept. But you need to work one some things
starting with the basics, follow these tips;
1. The background is way to blurry. It looks like you put some kind of pen stroke over it. If you look at a picture, you'll never see this. So, make sure whenever you're trying to add some depth, just try to blur it a bit, with: filter -> Blur/blur more.
2. The c4d you used, is directly behind the render, but it has the same depth as the background.. which makes it, in peoples eyes, think it's part of the background. And if you imagine the background without a render and see a wild c4d in there you'll be like; what is that?
3. Work on some render effects! ;D You only added some filters and some gradient maps. Try to play with smudging abit. NOT too much, just a bit.
4. You could try and add some lightning source, this will give it a far more realistic effect, even though it's fantasy.
4/10, because I think it's rather simple. But you did improve though. Keep on trying, that will help you the most.
Paradise Heaven (01-18-2013)
8/10.
change the font location.
don't put the font location into the render that suck
then i will give you 10/10.
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