- You need to hit the beats harder imo. Your popping is there but try to add more "oomph" to it
- Add more variety and some "wow factor" moves in your set; I know you're still learning but try to add atleast one "oh wtf lemme rewind that again" move
+ This time it looks like you listened to the song more than once before recording; either that or you've had the song on replay at some point of time.
Keep on practicing
P.S. I bboy and freestyle hip-hop if you're wondering why I CnC your dance videos
