Need some CnC.

[GeorgeGFX]

Been a while since last time I used PS.
Gonna practice hard to get back all my skills.
This time I'll master the smudge style, hopefully.. and also I'll try to learn how to make them stupid texts.

This is my first attempt at trying a C4D signature, I think it's a bit too dark and over sharpened but whatever, was just a warm-up.



CnC

[Nickachu]

you already pointed out the flaws yourself, it's oversharpened and the c4d's are just randomly placed, which kills it for me tbh.
in terms of depth it's not really that well exectued either. also you placed a lightsource at the bottom of the tag while there's really multiple light sources coming from the top, sides and back. so in this case you would be better off without a lightsource.

also the colors are so dull, like i said learn color management so you really know how to make things stand out more.

[Taiki]

the c4ds you added do nothing to help the render in anyway. its a complete mess imo.

[GeorgeGFX]

Agreed with both @Nick, @Taiki
Gonna workout on some things today and I'll post results (new signature).

[Rhysin]

Lighting is way off. Also, blend his arm in more on top of the sig. It looks pasted on and forced there.