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Last edited by Zion; 08-21-2013 at 10:38 PM.
the 3d is cool .-.
This is how a GunZ frag should be made. c:
My old sentence:
Zoney Likey.
Fall down seven times,
stand up eight
Turn the pain into power
Not realy great.
The frag is mediocre, the music doesnt fit, not with the kills nor with the overall flow of the frag.
The parts of "own" material are mediocre at best.
Blunt text with bad camera movement results in hard to read text in the middle.
Gj on the effort but can be improved by alot.
Hi, was pretty good mate only things I would suggest are maybe working a little harder on your 3d Scenes if you are going to use them. Making the text more attractive would be a start and work on your camera animation and transitioning in your 3d program ( max, c4d) w/e one. But yeah got some good upcoming gunz editors
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Camera movements are poorly done, the text is too simple and basic textured. you even failed to rotate / stick some in the wall on the end.
The character just hangs there in the air, at least animate the rig in a good position, or just leave it out. I think this "3D" is pointless.
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