My third try.

[Jawarisin]

Well, except what's mentionned before. I think some transitions are too slow for such a fast game as gunz.

Also, I think you should record a longer period and only take the sweet moments, because currently we are watching 99% of you running around and spamming shotgun (not completely interesting). And 1% of nice moments.

On the bright side, the music was appropriate.


This is just critics, it is not to be taken personnal, if you want me to remove this comment, feel free to pm me and I will edit it out. I just wanted to give feedback

[Seprone]

Well, except what's mentionned before. I think some transitions are too slow for such a fast game as gunz.

Also, I think you should record a longer period and only take the sweet moments, because currently we are watching 99% of you running around and spamming shotgun (not completely interesting). And 1% of nice moments.

On the bright side, the music was appropriate.


This is just critics, it is not to be taken personnal, if you want me to remove this comment, feel free to pm me and I will edit it out. I just wanted to give feedback

It's alright I take all criticism, I am personally proud of it because I made it better than my last ones and im a beginner frag maker.