Originally Posted by
Kintama
9.5/10 perf.
Ok. You should do a limited amount of shots in a clip, there fore the viewer doesn't get bored of watching the same thing over and over. And im not saying you really did it there. But Im just saying that for future reference.
This one is just a reccomendation. At 0:11 - 0:16, You should take off all that extra around the screen, and focus on the person dying xD.
Last, I wasn't really a fan of how it ended. Maybe, making a transition that would have me like wow. That one ended a bit too fast and plain, other than the whole video.
Other than that, you are really talented.
you should make me a frag yo.