Another Collab [Sakaiyuji7 & EpicKLF]

[Luneth]

The focus is slightly off imo.. Don't really know what the main point is here.
If you're not sure wether the text looks alright, remove it

[Azuki]

It's nice.


Have you tried messing around with gradient maps / photo filters to add mood to it?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aY1-b1BeICc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFTXOT4DoJk
you just turn the opacity down to roughly 15-20% on that layer of the gradient map/photo filter. I usually use the blue-red-yellow preset for the gradient map. But you can use which ever one you feel like works best with the colours of the signature and just mess around with it.


Also i'd move the text left and up a bit so it overlaps her shoulder slightly and make the text a lighter colour.


You could also rotate the left plant c4d to roughly the same angle as the render so that it keeps the flow of the whole signature mostly in one direction. If theres a part of that c4d that sticks out when you rotate it (not going in the same direction as most of the c4d) then just erase it.


Apart from that it's great. 7/10

Text Placement,the rule of thirds is missing. Depth is a bit missing,blurring such parts doesn't make it a depth,especially when it doesn't attracts our eyes into the main subject/the render.The image is flat,very flat.

I likey but something's missing and I can't put my finger on it.

I think the blue is too strong in this one D:

Too much blue!

The focus is slightly off imo.. Don't really know what the main point is here.
If you're not sure wether the text looks alright, remove it

Firstly, why too much blue? the original render is blue-ish, the background is blue (cuz from FF tidus and yuna wp) so I made it blue to blend with the background and such. (since I'm the one started it). And regarding to Resorts question, Yes. I used Gradients, curves, levels and any other adjustments. wanna see the original one? its not perfect.

[Osuu]

@sakai

I prefer the version in ur sig than the one posted cuz the blue is simply too strong in it, making it hard to see everything and has a lack of focus i guess :0

[EpicKLF]

@sakai

I prefer the version in ur sig than the one posted cuz the blue is simply too strong in it, making it hard to see everything and has a lack of focus i guess :0

Welp i failed everyone and especially sakai...

[Osuu]

Welp i failed everyone and especially sakai...

D: i think a better word for it was that there was a lack of contrast between light and dark :p