It doesn't look formal at all...
The text isn't even on the same font size.. which should be, let's not talk about that fixed "anti-rip" that you do not need.
Cause in the end without that anti-rip, you end up having the logo with the same font as the logo with some text and a different colour for each image.
Now if you take that KingPharaoh's GFX image of your signature, that stuff is sort of decent.
Edit: looking at your deviantart, those works seem to be tutorial works (tell me if I am wrong, if so.. follow some more tutorial).
Last edited by StephanM; 03-24-2016 at 06:18 AM.
la flame (03-24-2016)
why are you retards acting like you could do any better, gj
I think it's a good idea. I would just do some minor tweaking to what you have now, because what you have now doesn't look too bad, just some things don't really fit well.
The text looks alright, but I think you should switch certain colors. Maybe make Unbanned green, Banned red, Pending gray, and maybe Denied can be like an orange color or something. I only say this just so it makes some sort of sense. When I see unbanned, I think of approval, which usually is symbolized by something green like a check mark or something. I normally think of red when there's a ban on something/someone, and when things are pending usually you see it grayed out. I said orange instead of red for denied so it doesn't cause confusion between colors, and it's the Freestyle color too so it'd make sense.
I also think you should perfectly center the Unbanned, Banned, Pending and Denied words, then maybe make the Freestyle GunZ logo a bit smaller and drop the logo slightly lower in the circle.
I would find a way to make the circles appear more like stamps too. Maybe reshape them and add a little more definition or something. I just don't think of a stamp when I look at them. Honestly if you didn't mention that they were stamps, I wouldn't have known lol. Just looked like random logos to me or something.
Nice job though good effort. ^^
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