Dead end - I had the idea in mind, I knew what I wanted it to look like, but I feel like something's wrong. Any idea on how to improve it?
Dead end - I had the idea in mind, I knew what I wanted it to look like, but I feel like something's wrong. Any idea on how to improve it?
is it meant to be that dark cause i barely can see sry im blind
hm..after debating for a while...I don't know maybe if you could get some backlight on the trees to make them look more 3D and to represent the moon's luminescence (the trunks)
i know its dark, and supposed to be..but something about the trunks just bugs me a little (if I were to critique)
overall, very well done piece imo
The big two jellies in the front are poorly blurry/done, think if you try and make those again it might make your overall piece look a lot better.
I actually like the whole idea of the piece!
Although you do not necessarily need to know what I've done -LP unintended reference- in order to tell me what looks weird in it, here's the original photo:
https://unsplash.com/search/forest?photo=XaR_INqTssg
I strongly believe you are not blind. Yes it is dark.
Thank you c:
Thanks for your criticism. Yeah that's a good idea to try and create shadows on the floor in relevance to the moon.
Thank you, these jellys were actually blurred on purpose, as to give a depth effect (to make them seem closer to the viewer's eyes).
I'll post an edit without blurring them and see how it looks.
Last edited by Lemonish; 04-24-2017 at 12:03 PM.
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