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    Al-Malik // The King

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    Didn't really spend awhole lot of time choosing the font. If you guys got any suggestions for a different font, I love to see them.
    /10 please.

    Any tips on howto make it better would also be appreciated.
    Thanks.

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    It's empty on the left side, the part I don't like about it.
    6/10.


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    looks kinda like the render is slapped on and brushes are shit are in the background, try to blend the render into the background to make it seem more natural not so forced. Also not a bad idea to learn basic smudging and just use that with no other brushes/fractals/c4d's etc. if you learn basic smudging you can make anything and it would be hella decent, compared to just brush spam. after that learning were light should be and adding shadows would be nice. things like contrasting colours and levels/curves all comes with time.


    just noticed but its huge, i usually make something small to make it more concise, makes it easier to the end user to see the whole image imo, also easier to work with less empty space.
    Last edited by Taiki; 01-08-2013 at 12:48 AM.

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    Too much spam not enough flow

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    Al-Malik // The King

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    Originally Posted by Taiki View Post
    looks kinda like the render is slapped on and brushes are shit are in the background, try to blend the render into the background to make it seem more natural not so forced. Also not a bad idea to learn basic smudging and just use that with no other brushes/fractals/c4d's etc. if you learn basic smudging you can make anything and it would be hella decent, compared to just brush spam. after that learning were light should be and adding shadows would be nice. things like contrasting colours and levels/curves all comes with time.


    just noticed but its huge, i usually make something small to make it more concise, makes it easier to the end user to see the whole image imo, also easier to work with less empty space.
    Got a video? I know howto smudge, but I'm not sure if it's what you mean.

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    Originally Posted by Adam View Post
    Got a video? I know howto smudge, but I'm not sure if it's what you mean.
    He means you're spamming brushes...... way too much. There is no flow

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    1. copyright on that image is on my name ;D
    2. I got a better version with the same render, made ages ago :$

    ^^ 3 year old work..

    well serious now..
    Left too empty,
    Too plain, just brushes on bg with different color tints..
    render just pasted on it..
    Text so plain..
    no flow..

    sorry ):

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    Ekital's Avatar Ultima

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    Honestly that render is trash lol sorry. No action barely any lighting, just a bad render to work with.

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    Originally Posted by Ekital View Post
    Honestly that render is trash lol sorry. No action barely any lighting, just a bad render to work with.
    Aperrently you are so bad, that you can't work with so called OPEN renders,
    where the top and sides are left open without cut, that is called a good render.

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