pro, i don't take ss when i win at cws, but you do because you suck
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I got some suggestions/change/things to remove to make your fragment look better in general:
- Remove the intro text (or change how you wrote it + a different font, something cleaner with more style).
- Center the phrase "In association with" (I am sure it is not centered).
- Change the font of the phrase "Freestyle Gunz community frag" and change the phrase to "Freestyle GunZ Community Frag" (since GunZ is with a capital Z > see their logo).
- Change the font of the names of the players when you announced them all together (the clip was of a dungeon map, with 6 names on it).
- You might want to remove the words 3 shot and 4 shot since that did not make that much sense cause some clips in between them had more then 3 or 4 shots, and it would look better just without the words.
- And.. you might want to reduce the brightness of your frag with at least 10%, since it is pretty bright to me.
What I do like about your frag is:
- The music you chose
- Most transitions that you used (from slow to normal/fast)
- The way you recorded the maps (different then most video's)
- The "Tain presents" animation
- The clips you choice for this so far
- The whole idea of actually releasing a community frag (people tried it before but never acutally did it)
nice frag done. but if its gona be orient picture vid.. might wana add some else to it thast associated
gg brah ! (fapp here)
Only thing I like is intro song.
Other sht is gay as fck.
y u gay man