I got some suggestions/change/things to remove to make your fragment look better in general:
- Remove the intro text (or change how you wrote it + a different font, something cleaner with more style).
- Center the phrase "In association with" (I am sure it is not centered).
- Change the font of the phrase "Freestyle Gunz community frag" and change the phrase to "Freestyle GunZ Community Frag" (since GunZ is with a capital Z > see their logo).
- Change the font of the names of the players when you announced them all together (the clip was of a dungeon map, with 6 names on it).
- You might want to remove the words 3 shot and 4 shot since that did not make that much sense cause some clips in between them had more then 3 or 4 shots, and it would look better just without the words.
- And.. you might want to reduce the brightness of your frag with at least 10%, since it is pretty bright to me.
What I do like about your frag is:
- The music you chose
- Most transitions that you used (from slow to normal/fast)
- The way you recorded the maps (different then most video's)
- The "Tain presents" animation
- The clips you choice for this so far
- The whole idea of actually releasing a community frag (people tried it before but never acutally did it)
SuperShotty (07-22-2013)
nice frag done. but if its gona be orient picture vid.. might wana add some else to it thast associated
gg brah ! (fapp here)
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SuperShotty (07-22-2013)
Only thing I like is intro song.
Other sht is gay as fck.
y u gay man
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